Recommendation Writing
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I read on Mondays.
I play football on Tuesdays.
I watch TV on Wednesdays.
I swim on Thursdays.
I play computer on Fridays.
I play table tennis on Saturdays.
I have a rest on Sundays.
My favourite day of the week is Friday (which day) because I can play computer.
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Dear 陈永俊,

A sweet piece of work! Thank you for your sharing!

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My birthday is on August.
I would like to receive a/an toy for my birthday.
I want it because it's very interesting.
I hope my dad (who) will give one to me on my birthday.
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Dear Zhou Peng,
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My father likes eating meat. His favourite activity is swimming.
My mother likes eating peppers. Her favourite sports is skipping.
I like like eating vegetable. My favourite favourite sports is runnning.
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Dear 方鹤潼,
A wonderful piece of writing! Well done!

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Turtle live in the sea because they can swim.
Fish live in the water because they can't walk.
Puppy and kitten live in the house because they're very cute.
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Dear 张祖浩,

Good use of adjectives!

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To stay healthy, we should do the following:
1. Do 90 (how many) minutes of bicycling every day.
2. Sleep early (late/early) and wake early (late/early).
3. Eat lots of fruit and drink lots of water. Avoid food that is sugary or oily.
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Dear 付昕,

A wonderful piece of writing! Well done!

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I learn on Mondays.
I play piano on Tuesdays.
I shop on Wednesdays.
I play badminton on Thursdays.
I learn on Fridays.
I play football on Saturdays.
I visit grandma on Sundays.
My favourite day of the week is Sunday (which day) because I like grandma.
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Dear 方晓玫,

A wonderful piece of writing! Well done!

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I go to school on Mondays.
I watch TV on Tuesdays.
I have rest on Wednesdays.
I do sports on Thursdays.
I do homework on Fridays.
I play computer on Saturdays.
I read books on Sundays.
My favourite day of the week is Friday (which day) because tomorrow I can play!.
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Dear 靳耀凯,


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My birthday is on Monday.
I would like to receive a/an bike for my birthday.
I want it because I like it very much.
I hope my mum (who) will give one to me on my birthday.
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Dear 靳耀凯,


Good work! It is very fluent and you have written ...... More

I like going to Chinese (Chinese/Western) restaurants because I love eating Chinese food.
I often eat dumpling, Chinese dim sum and noodle at the restaurant.
I usually order juice to drink with my meal.
My favourite dish at the restaurant is Peking duck because It tastes and smells good.
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Dear 靳耀凯,


A wonderful piece of writing! Well done!

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I have a happy family.
My father is humorous and smart. He likes to work and swim.
My mother is pleasant and funny. She likes to cook and scream.
I am naughty and cute. I like to study and exercise.
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Dear 方晓玫,


Good ideas!

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To keep warm in winter, we can play some sports such as volleyball and football.
Aside from doing sports, we can also eat ice creams and drink juice.
If we still feel very cold, we should stay at home and drink soup.
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Dear 沈昊,

A wonderful piece of writing! Well done!

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My favourite toy is my car. It is yellow and blue.
I often play with it in the evening (when).
I love playing with it because it can run fast.
I don't want (want/don’t want) a new toy because I love my old car.
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Dear 祝灵悦,

Good grammar and good organization.Well done!

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I am from China (which country). I speak Chinese (which language).
I live in Shenzhen (which city). It is a clean and beautiful city. I like (like/dislike) it.
The place I like most in this city is sea because I like swimming.
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Dear 刘硕,

Good attempt at using different and new vocabulary!

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I am from China (which country). I speak Chinese (which language).
I live in Shenzhen (which city). It is a clean and beautiful city. I like (like/dislike) it.
The place I like most in this city is Happy Valley because it is charming.
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Dear 陈一凡,

Good work! It is very fluent and you have written like ...... More

This is a policeman. His job is to catch thieves.
This is a postman. His job is to send letters.
This is a fireman. His job is to fight fire.
This is a doctor. His job is to save patients.